Fim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Space 3 Parody]

Some of the drawings were ok, but the animation needs a bit more structure.

carmineglitch responds:

yah dude its the freaken file, i swear if flash would hav let me export it in swf. it would hav looked smooth as a baby's bottom

[Hero]

music sucked. animation was alright, but felt like some of the movement could have been fluider. You've clearly got the spark all you need is a little practise.

urbfilms responds:

Yeah thanks! I guess I just liked the song and that's why I put it in there.

[Holiday]

Loved it. Beautiful idea, great animation and choice of song, well crafted and original. Hope you do well in NATA :)

francisyfl responds:

Kodus to dave ! great music

[Worst .swf that has Audio]

crap.

Ceruleanmap responds:

Exactly.

[Take Me Back]

Noice little short here mate, I liked the car, and the way you conveyed a lot of emotion in the characters posture. We need to collab at some point! :)

Max-Vador responds:

it's so hard to make faceless emotionless clothesless stick people express emotion lol. thanks Sam, we'll get something or other going one of these days!

[Destroyer-of-Worlds]

Awesome

I'm guessing that there's a bunch of you uni students submitting work together? If not then I apologise, but if so I think you've made the best one so far out of all the ones I've seen. It reminded me of Animator vs Animation. Great job for a nooby :) Keep up the good work, this was quality.

stefansjs responds:

Yes, we were indeed a whole bunch of students!
Thank you for the positive review!

[Code Wars]

It was good!

Not to take a anything away from what you've made, but this could be improved. Although it looks well storyboarded and you clearly spent a lot of time on it so I won't be too harsh, my first flash wasn't anywhere near as good as this. However, I think the sound quality needs to be improved, plus early on in the flash I think there's a little problem with the shape tween you've done with the lightbulb over the characters head? Maybe just use the graphic of the lightbulb, convert it to a movie clip, then motion tween the alpha from 0% to 100% so it 'appears' above his head? Just a thought. Annnd also don't use the line tool! :P Everyone hates the line tool.. but keep at this! You've clearly got some talent.

PainHex responds:

Thank you for the positive response. I will continue to work on my animating. And about the lightbulb, thanks for the advice, I was wondering of better ways to do it. Thanks again! I value your criticism.

[A Lovely Dream]

Good

Genre-wise this isn't really my cup of tea, but the animation in this was indisputably excellent, loved all the frame by frame of the girl moving. And it was clearly well storyboarded and drawn with a lot of skill, good work overall. I'd love it if you'd do something a little more upbeat though :)

Lazymodecomics responds:

I'll see what I can do. Most of my work isn't very "newground-ish". I'd need more sleep to be upbeat, haha.

-Jake

[SS - Thoughts]

animation was fine

content was semi bullshit. Spirituality is one of them toxic subjects that make most people sound like hippies.

RiverJordan responds:

It's a good thing I'm not most people.

[Half Cut Pants]

Congratulations! Your vote was the last vote neede

Just what I needed in the morning.

RhysMus responds:

porn?